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David's Star
A dream from long ago...
SCENE 1:
DAVID, 24 YEARS OLD, IS A FAMOUS COMIC BOOK ARTIST, KNOWN AROUND THE WORLD FOR HIS WORK.  ONE OF THE FEW AFRICAN AMERICAN COMIC ILLUSTRATORS.  HE HAS MANY SERIES, BUT MOST OF THEM ARE ON THE BRINK OF ENDING, AS HIS IDEAS ARE STARTING TO RUN OUT.  THE COMPANY HE WORKS FOR, LAND COMICS, WILL GO BELLY-UP WITHOUT HIS WORKS, AND HE CANNOT THINK OF ANYTHING TO SAVE IT.

THE SCENE OPENS WITH DAVID AT HIS DRAWING DESK, ILLUSTRATING THE FINAL PAGE OF HIS LATEST WORK.  HIS EYELIDS DROOP AS THE SUN PEEKS THROUGH HIS WINDOW BLINDS.  THE OFFICE DOOR OPENS, AND THE PRESIDENT OF THE COMPANY, RICHARD, WALKS INSIDE.

RICHARD:  Don't tell me you've stayed in here all night again.
DAVID:  I had to...  (HE SCRIBBLES ANOTHER LINE DOWN)  This thing has to be finished for printing today, doesn't it?
RICHARD:  We can't let our main illustrator over-work himself.  It could have been a day late...  You know people will wait for your work.
DAVID:  I can't disappoint them...  I've done that too many times before.  We need to increase our sales, right...  then we need to keep a tight schedule.
RICHARD:  Not this tight, David.
DAVID:  (PUTTING HIS PEN AWAY)  I'm done now.  Be thankful I got it done this morning...  otherwise I would have never finished it in time for printing today.
RICHARD:  Don't ignore me.  You'll thank me later.
DAVID:  Whatever....  (HE HOLDS HIS HEAD IN HIS HAND, TRYING TO KEEP HIMSELF AWAKE.)  I'm going to clock out...  I'll see you tomorrow, Richard.
RICHARD:  Yeah, go get some rest.  You need it.
DAVID:  I know...  I know....  (HE SLIPS ON HIS OVERCOAT AND WALKS OUT THE OFFICE.)  See you later.

SCENE 2:
OUTSIDE OF LAND COMICS, A WOMAN, BETHANIE, 23 YEARS OLD,  SITS ON THE SIDEWALK, HOLDING A SIGN READING "WILL WRITE FOR MONEY."  SHE WEARS A SMALL T-SHIRT UNDER A LARGER MEN'S SHIRT TIED AT THE WAIST WITH SOME OLD JEANS.  HER HAIR IS PULLED BACK IN A PONYTAIL, WITH TRESSES FRAMING HER FACE.  STACKS OF PAPER SURROUND HER, MOST OF IT ALREADY WRITTEN ON.  A FEW PEOPLE WALK PAST HER, SNEERING.  SOME THROW SOME COINS, NEVER EVEN GLANCING AT HER WORKS.

AFTER SOME TIME, DAVID WALKS OUT OF THE OFFICE BUILDING.  HE SEES HER SIGN AND HER PAPERS, AND HE DECIDES TO STOP AND LOOK AT THEM.

BETHANIE:  Hello, sir.  How are you today?
DAVID:  Tired, but I'm all right.  (HE LOOKS AT A NEWER-LOOKING BATCH OF PAPERS)  So, what's this one about?
BETHANIE:  Well, lots of things.  It has a bit of science fiction in it, along with some action and comedy...
DAVID:  Yes, most science fiction stories have that, I've noticed.
BETHANIE:  Yes, sir.  I realize that.  That's probably why nobody will look at them, except you of course.
DAVID:  You must be joking...  I'm the first to look at this today?
BETHANIE:  Yes, sir.
DAVID:  Bethanie Jones...  That's your name?
BETHANIE:  Yes, sir.
DAVID:  Well, guess what?  Mine's not "sir."
BETHANIE:  Sorry, si....  What is your name then?
DAVID:  David Knoles.
BETHANIE:  Knoles...  Knoles....
DAVID:  I work in there.  (POINTS TOWARDS LAND COMICS)
BETHANIE:  Really?  Oh, I always wanted to work there.  That way, I would never be stuck out here...
DAVID:  And why can't you?
BETHANIE:  Not to be blunt sir, but are you kidding?  I have no experience.
DAVID:  What do you call all of this then?
BETHANIE:  A whole lot of nothing.
DAVID:  Nothing....  I know you have some ideas in that mind of yours, if you're able to write all of this.  Come on.  I'll get you some coffee.  Would you like that?
BETHANIE:  Sure, I suppose there is a first time for everything...  let me get my things.  (SHE PICKS UP STACKS OF PAPERS, PUTTING THEM INTO A BOX AND HOISTING IT ATOP HER SHOULDER.)  Where to?
DAVID:  First of all, I'll put that at the desk inside so you don't have to carry it around.
BETHANIE:  Really, sir, you don't have to.
DAVID:  Don't worry about a thing, Miss Jones.  (HE TAKES THE BOX OFF HER SHOULDER AND SLIDES IT THROUGH THE DOOR.)  Mr. Robinson, could you put this behind the desk?  I'll pick it up later.  Thank you!
BETHANIE:  You really didn't have to do that, Mr. Knoles.
DAVID:  Sh-h-h...  I wouldn't say that name too often around here.  My name's too well known.  (SHE LAUGHS.)  What?
BETHANIE:  You certainly aren't modest.
DAVID:  I didn't mean to brag--
BETHANIE:  It's all right.  Everyone needs to be able to boast about some thing or another.
DAVID:  Yeah.  So....  coffee?
BETHANIE:  You can get some if you want...  I'm afraid I haven't made enough money yet today.
DAVID:  Don't worry about it.
BETHANIE:  No, I don't need charity--
DAVID:  Just don't think of it as charity.  This is just a friendly gesture.
BETHANIE:  I suppose....  If you think it's all right.
DAVID:  (LEANING IN CLOSELY AND WHISPERING)  You're talking to the great David Knoles.  I can buy an extra cup of coffee here and there.
BETHANIE:  (SOFTLY LAUGHING)  Sure, why not.

SCENE 2:
ANDY'S CAFE.  DAVID SHOWS BETHANIE TO A SEAT AND GOES TO THE COUNTER TO ORDER CAPPUCCINO.  HE RETURNS WITH TWO HOT, TALL GLASSES.

BETHANIE:  Thanks again, Mr.  Kn--  David.
DAVID:  Yeah, that works a bit better in places like this.  (HE LOOKS AROUND, SEEING NOBODY THERE.)  Then again, when the only other person here is the owner...  (HE SMILES)  Me and Andy have been good friends for years.  Ever since this little cafe opened.  (CALLING OVER TO THE COUNTER)  Andy, how long have you been here?
ANDY:  Oh, a good six years.

ANDY IS AN OLDER MAN, ABOUT 45 YEARS OLD.  HE HAS A DARK OLIVE SKIN TONE WITH EYES THE SHAPE AND COLOR OF ALMONDS.  ANDY'S HAIR HAS STARTED TO GRAY, WITH JUST A HINT OF WHAT USED TO BE BLACK HAIR.  HIS APRON LOOKS LIKE IT HAS BEEN AROUND SINCE THE OPENING OF THE SHOP.  HE IS OBVIOUSLY A HARD WORKER.

DAVID:  Yeah, it's been a while.
ANDY:  I noticed you ordered something extra today, David.  Who's this?
DAVID:  This is Bethanie Jones.  She's a writer.
BETHANIE:  Well....  Not exactly.
DAVID:  Of course you are.  Now, you never did tell me what that one I picked up was about.
BETHANIE:  Oh, just another one of my science fictions...  Nothing really that I'm proud of just yet.  I only have a little bit of it written--
DAVID:  Come on, Beth.  I didn't ask you that.
BETHANIE:  (BLUSHING, SHE THINKS)  Beth?   (SHE SPEAKS)  I...  It's about a girl, Sheila, who gets lost in a labyrinth while trying to get rid of a monster for a nearby village.  She works for an organization built just for this kind of thing.  They're very high tech, but the maze that she goes into makes all of her equipment useless.  She loses all communication with headquarters, but she decides to go on ahead.  She eventually runs into the monster, after a while of searching, but someone else has already showed up to take care of the monster himself.  (DAVID PUTS HIS ELBOW ON THE TABLE AND HOLDS HIS HAND TO HIS CHIN.)  Am I saying too much?  I can stop, if you'd like.
DAVID:  No, go on.  This sounds pretty good, actually.
BETHANIE:  Thank you.  I appreciate that.  Not many people think that this is a good idea at all.  Getting back to the story, this young man is named Rick.  He has been stuck in the maze for years, on the same mission as Sheila.  He says that the maze changes every day.  The only way is to find the right dead end.
DAVID:  The right dead end?  How can that be?
BETHANIE:  Up to this point, Sheila had only turned away from the dead end walls.  She never even touched one before.  If she had, she would have ended up at an exit to the maze.
DAVID:  You mean she could have gone home that easily?
BETHANIE:  No.  You must remember that the maze changes almost constantly, as do the exits.
DAVID:  I see.
BETHANIE:  Sheila and Rick decide that they should try to find their ways out of the maze together.  Basically, that script follows them through the labyrinth, through good and bad, health and curse.
DAVID:  Curse?
BETHANIE:  Yes, one in particular.  Rick was cursed with--
DAVID:  No, wait.  If you don't mind, I'd like to go ahead and just read the story myself.
BETHANIE:  Well, of course.  Why wouldn't I?
ANDY:  Doesn't seem like a bad idea at all.
BETHANIE:  Yes, I mean, who would want to just hear a story--
ANDY:  No, I mean the story itself.  I'd like a copy myself.
DAVID:  See?  You're already a celebrity.
BETHANIE:  I wouldn't go quite that far.
DAVID:  But I would.  (HE CATCHES HIMSELF GAZING INTO HER EYES.)  I mean, I'd like to read more of your stories.  I could get some public notice out about them.
BETHANIE:  I told you earlier, David...  I don't take charity.
DAVID:  Charity?  Never.  This is something great, something I know you can do.  Just think of it as another friendly gesture of mine.  (HE YAWNS.)
ANDY:  Another long night, eh?
DAVID:  Yeah....  the coffee just isn't working this morning!
BETHANIE:  I won't keep you, then...  You need to go home and get some rest.
DAVID:  Everyone else has been telling me that today...  do I really look that bad?
BETHANIE:  No, not at all!  You're actually very--  (SHE CATCHES HERSELF)  Well, you're starting to look a little drowsy.  But other than that....  you're....  (SHE TRAILS OFF, NODDING HER HEAD.  ANDY LOOKS OVER BETHANIE'S SHOULDER, LOOKING AT DAVID, WINKING AT HIM.)
DAVID:  Thanks...  I guess...
BETHANIE:  Oh, please, don't take offense or anything.  You're very good-looking.
DAVID:  (LAUGHING TO HIMSELF)  It's all right.  I knew what you meant.
BETHANIE:  But really, you should go home and get some rest.  (SHE STANDS UP TO LEAVE)
DAVID:  Wait, before you go...  (SHE STOPS AND TURNS BACK AROUND)  I'd like to get a chance to offer you a job over at Land Comics.  You could be my writer.
BETHANIE:  (SHOCKED, ALMOST SPEECHLESS)  But I don't have any experience...
DAVID:  What was that box full of papers I put in the front office, then?  I call that experience.
BETHANIE:  Well....
ANDY:  This is a chance of a lifetime.
BETHANIE:  Just....  let me think a while.  Let me sleep on it, and I'll see if I feel up to it.
DAVID:  No problem.  (HE STANDS UP)  I've got to get home and rest...  Do you need a ride anywhere, Beth?
BETHANIE:  Nah...  I'm okay.
DAVID:  You sure?  It's not just the nights that this city is dangerous.
ANDY:  I'm sure that she knows, David.  She'll be just fine.  (BETHANIE LOOKS AT ANDY QUIZICALLY, AS IF SHE DOESN'T KNOW HOW HE KNOWS THAT SHE WILL BE OKAY.)
DAVID:  Suit yourself.  If you need me at all, this is my phone number.  (HE HANDS HER A BUSINESS CARD.)  Call me when you need me, okay?
BETHANIE:  Sure.
DAVID:  (AS HE WALKS OUT THE CAFE DOOR)  And think about that job!

DAVID SHUTS THE DOOR AS HE LEAVES, AND BETHANIE SITS DOWN AT THE BAR IN FRONT OF ANDY.  SHE LOOKS AT THE CARD, THEN AT HIM.

ANDY:  Why didn't you go with him?
BETHANIE:  Because I can take care of myself perfectly well.
ANDY:  Don't tell me that, Bethanie.  You may not know it, but I see you, day after day, walking in and out of here, a cup of coffee with your first sell's money.  Every day, I watch you selling your stories, and creating them just by living them out.  You're lost, too.  But I'll tell you this, David is not a dead end.
BETHANIE:  Andy, it's not like that.
ANDY:  Oh, no.  Don't give me that.  (HE STARTS COOKING A BREAKFAST PLATE.)
BETHANIE:  Really, it isn't.
ANDY:  And just why not?
BETHANIE:  We just met, Andy!  I mean, I didn't even realize he was David Knoles!  I didn't tell him, but he's my idol...  I could never ask someone like him for anything.
ANDY:  You're not asking him for anything at all!  He's offered everything for you!
BETHANIE:  It's just a lot of charity.  I work for what I get.
ANDY:  And you're not getting much, are you?
BETHANIE: That's besides the point...
ADNY:  I'm pretty sure that is the point.
BETHANIE:  (A LONG PAUSE)  Well.....  there is another reason...
ANDY:  There is?  (SHE NODS, LOOKING DOWN AT HER COFFEE CUP)  Oh...  I know why...  Don't let them hold you back.  You deserve him.
BETHANIE:  I can't!  Andy, I just can't...
ANDY:  You're a grown woman, Bethanie.  Don't tell me you're going to let them push you around like that.
BETHANIE:  I can't just leave them behind like that.
ANDY:  (LEANING OVER THE COUNTER, BREAKFAST PLATE IN HAND)  They left you.  (HE PLACES THE PLATE IN FRONT OF HER.)   Here.  Think of it as another friendly gesture.

BETHANIE SMILES AND STARTS EATING.  AS SHE TAKES HER FIRST FEW BITES, SHE LOOKS DOWN AT THE BUSINESS CARD, THEN SHAKES HER HEAD.  WITH EVERY BITE, SHE LOOKS BACK DOWN AT THE CARD.  TIME PASSES, SEVERAL HOURS.  WITH ONE LAST LOOK AT THE CARD, SHE FINALLY MAKES UP HER MIND.

BETHANIE:  Andy, do you have a phone?

SCENE 3:
IN FRONT OF THE LAND COMICS OFFICE BUILDING.  BETHANIE WAITS AT THE DOOR AS DAVID COMES DOWN THE STREET IN HIS CAR TO MEET HER.  HE PARKS ON THE SIDEWALK ABOUT 20 FEET AWAY FROM THE DOOR.

BETHANIE:  (WAVING)  Over here, David!
DAVID:  I see you, don't worry.  (HE WALKS UP TO HER)  Glad we decided to meet here.  Otherwise, you might never have gotten your stuff back.
BETHANIE:  Yeah, I'd like to have those stories of mine.
DAVID:  I know what you mean.  I like to hold on to whatver I can come up with.  I hate it when things slip away from me for one reason or another.
BETHANIE:  You....  you're not just talking about stories.... are you?
DAVID:  What?
BETHANIE:  Nothing.
DAVID:  Anyways...  you said you wanted to have dinner with me.
BETHANIE:  If it's okay with you, I mean, you don't have to...
DAVID:  If I didn't want to, I wouldn't have met you here now.
BETHANIE:  I guess so...  (SHE BLUSHES)  So, I guess we should get going?
DAVID:  I know the perfect place.  But first, I'm going to have to get your stories.  (HE GOES INTO THE BUILDING, THEN COMES OUT WITH THE BOX OF PAPERS.)  There we go.  (HE PUTS THE BOX IN HIS CAR TRUNK, THEN GOES TO OPEN THE PASSENGER DOOR FOR BETHANIE.)
BETHANIE:  Thank you!  You're too kind.  (SHE CLIMBS INTO THE CAR.)
DAVID:  (SITTING IN THE DRIVER'S SEAT, STARTS THE CAR, AND BEGINS TO DRIVE DOWN THE STREET.)  And we're off.  Just so I know for future reference, namely where I'll drop you off after dinner, where do you live?
BETHANIE:  Don't worry.  I'll take the bus or call a cab.
DAVID:  Okay, but I'm paying the fare.
BETHANIE:  (LAUGHING)  Yeah, it does add up at times.
DAVID:  So, what is it that you do for a living, besides selling your stories?
BETHANIE:  That's about it right there.
DAVID:  Really?  That's amazing, being able to live a life just by giving out ideas.
BETHANIE:  Yeah...  I guess you could call it that.
DAVID:  Then again, I guess I'm doing just about the same thing, just in more of a visual form.
BETHANIE:  Yeah.
DAVID:  So, have you thought about that job?
BETHANIE:  Working over at Land?  I have to say, it would be an honor--
DAVID:  So you'll take the job?
BETHANIE:  I'm still thinking about it.
DAVID:  Remember, this could be a once-in-a-lifetime thing.
BETHANIE:  I know, I know...  Trust me, I got enough of that from Andy.
DAVID:  Is it just me, or do you two know each other relatively well?
BETHANIE:  Oh, after a few sales, I go in there for a meal.  He knows me a little.  I didn't really know just how much he knew me until earlier today, though.
DAVID:  Really?  Well, you'd be surprised what word of mouth can do, I guess.
BETHANIE:  What have you heard?
DAVID:  Nothing except what you've told me.  Is there something I should know?
BETHANIE:  No...  not at all.

(DAVID PULLS UP TO AN APARTMENT BUILDING.)

DAVID:  Well, this is home.
BETHANIE:  I thought we were going to dinner?
DAVID:  Of course.   I'm fixing dinner at my place.
BETHANIE:  Oh...  I....
DAVID:  (SIGHS)  I'm sorry.  It's probably a little fast.  (HE STARTS TO CLIMB BACK INTO THE CAR)
BETHANIE:  No, not at all!  Don't worry.  I just haven't had a home-cooked meal in a few years.
DAVID:  You eat out every day?
BETHANIE:  Pretty much.
DAVID:  Well then, you're in for a treat!  (HE GETS OUT OF THE CAR AND WALKS TO HIS APARTMENT DOOR.  HE UNLOCKS IT AND OPENS THE DOOR, INVITING BETHANIE INSIDE FIRST.  SHE WALKS IN, IMMEDIATELY SEEING HIS STUDIO APARTMENT COVERED IN POSTERS AND OTHER LAND COMICS MEMORABILIA SURROUNDING HER.)
BETHANIE:  Wow....  This is amazing....  I never thought there was this much to collect from Land...
DAVID:  Yeah...  like you said, I'm not that modest.  Most of this is publicity from my own works.
BETHANIE:  You made all of these?  I had no idea...  I read a lot of these when I was still in high school.  Just how old are you?
DAVID:  (LAUGHING)  I'm twenty-four.  I've been working on comics and sending them in to Land since I was in high school.  It'd probably give a reason behind all that.  I'm not that much older than you, I believe.
BETHANIE:  That would make sense...  You're just a year older than me, I think.
DAVID:  You think?
BETHANIE:  I...  I'll tell you later.
DAVID:  Fair enough.  (HE STARTS TO TAKE OUT SOME INGREDIENTS FOR THE MEAL.)
BETHANIE:  What a day...  didn't sell a thing...
DAVID:  Well, Andy and I wanted a copy of that one with Sheila and Rick.
BETHANIE:  Well...  From doing this for so long, I know the difference between wanting something and buying something.
DAVID:  Guess so.  Sorry I didn't give the box back to you sooner.
BETHANIE:  It's all right.  I doubt I could have sold anything today, anyway.  I had too much on my mind after you left.
DAVID:  Did something happen to you I should know about?
BETHANIE:  I think something did...  but I think you'd know it already if it did happen.
DAVID:  (A CONFUSED LOOK)  Maybe...